in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studied

There is no doubt these days several countries provide support for their youngsters to get
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benefits and drawbacks . In terms of advantages are effective for teenagers to have
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, they can get more experience , soft
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decision than that . To illustrate , there are surveys in advanced countries published about
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to resolve any issues if facing them in future .
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opportunity to admission
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drawbacks but the best
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to improve their
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