Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

When it comes to
environment
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the environment
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everyone wants to think about
to make
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it better but no one wants to do it. There are certain individuals who are trying to improve
environment
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and
also
there are great
companies
and
goverments
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governments
government
as well who are trying to create a better lifestyle for the people. I partially disagree with the given statement and I will explain it with some examples.
Environment
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has been a crucial ingrain in our life, no one can live peacefully if the
environment
is struggling.
For instance
: In Juhu beach plastic pollutants
was
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significantly increased and
due to
this
issue
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the beach
environment
was having trouble. It was leading to mass destruction
to
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the sea lives. Big
instituitions
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institutions
and some
goverment
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government
officials started an
initiation
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of cleaning the plastic waste and
make
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it green by situating dustbins all over the beach and
also
giving education to the vendors who are doing their business near the shore.
Companies
and individuals can make a difference by doing their job of not polluting their own
mother land
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motherland
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.
Companies
for instance
who have dozens of factories should understand and should comply
by
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with
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the rules given by the government of not creating unnecessary air and water pollution and should be
in
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within
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a given range and not on the outskirts where
environment
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the environment
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is a shelter to numerous wild
lifes
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life
lives
. An individual duty is to be educated
of
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on
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the leading problems of the
environment
and bestow that knowledge to other people. I partially disagree with the statement because
of
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the woke individuals who are trying to create awareness are the ones
which
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who
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grab
attention
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the attention
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to
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of
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the big
companies
and governments which
lead
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leads
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to
upcoming
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development of the
environment
.
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  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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