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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials(eg,paper, glass, can). What are the reasons and solutions?

Considering the detrimental effects of
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waste
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 recycling in a few
nations
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. The below essay will shed some light on possible causes behind it and some solutions in order to tackle
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 with, the foremost reason behind the incapability of a few
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 to manage
waste
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 is because of limited resources. Many developing and underdeveloped countries are struggling with managing the basic necessities of the increasing population, let alone managing
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waste
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 products. Another contributing factor is the lack of
awareness
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 among people about handling the
garbage
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. The government authorities in some
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, placed the recycle bin with different colour schemes in localities,
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, most of the people are unable to categorize the
garbage
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 and wrongly
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 it in the wrong bins.
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, putting the paper cup in a glass bin or vice versa.
This
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 results in the
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 becoming non-recyclable.
This
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 occurs because of the lack of knowledge and
awareness
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 among citizens. Solutions to
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 problems are simple yet practical. The countries should organize
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 campaigns in order to teach citizens about
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waste
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 management and the benefits of recycling it.
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, the authorities, should promote
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reusable items and impose high taxes on fresh or single-time-use products to discourage the buyers.
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 to that, developed countries should provide the required assistance and resources to developing and underdeveloped
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 to manage
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waste
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 more effectively. To recapitulate, factors like limited resources and lack of
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 for
garbage
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 management are the main reasons
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why many
nations
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 are still unable to handle the
waste
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 effectively,
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, by implementing the solutions aforementioned above, these issues can be easily tackled.

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