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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the percentage of
Crime
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 in the UK in 2022 from 1 year old to 64
years
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 old.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the relationship between
Crime
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 and Age is increased from 12
years
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 old to 20
years
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 old and the opposite are true for the other ages from 28 to 64
years
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 old. In terms of the highest percentage of ,
Crime
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 it was in three different ages 20
years
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, 16
years
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 and 24
years
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 old with 80%, 70% and 60% respectively.
Whereas
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Crime
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 decreased from 20% to 9% from age 24
years
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 old to 64
years
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 old,
However
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 almost there is no
Crime
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 below 8
years
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 old. In summary,
crime
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 increases during
teenage
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the teenage
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 and young adults create more issues in their society and do more crimes compared to other ages during the same period of time.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line
  • graph
  • trend
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
  • go up
  • go down
  • climb
  • drop
  • peak
  • highest
  • lowest
  • month
  • year
  • total
  • crime
  • UK
  • last year
  • pattern
  • fluctuate
  • vary
  • steady
  • stable
  • sharp
  • gradual
  • gradually
  • sharply
  • month by month
  • pie
  • share
  • portion
  • part
  • type
  • category
  • crime type
  • big
  • small
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • fraction
  • around
  • more
  • less
  • equal
  • bigger
  • smaller
  • higher
  • lower
  • similar
  • different
  • compared with
  • in comparison
  • and
  • but
  • however
  • although
  • therefore
  • so
  • then
  • finally
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