The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the percentage of
Crime
in the UK in 2022 from 1 year old to 64
years
old.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the relationship between
Crime
and Age is increased from 12
years
old to 20
years
old and the opposite are true for the other ages from 28 to 64
years
old. In terms of the highest percentage of ,
Crime
it was in three different ages 20
years
, 16
years
and 24
years
old with 80%, 70% and 60% respectively.
Whereas
Crime
decreased from 20% to 9% from age 24
years
old to 64
years
old,
However
almost there is no
Crime
below 8
years
old. In summary,
crime
increases during
teenage
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and young adults create more issues in their society and do more crimes compared to other ages during the same period of time.
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