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Some feel governments, rather than private companies, should be in charge of medical services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is quite debatable if
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health care
services
 should be made solely public or private. A number of
people
 support the idea of making it government authorized,
however
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 others oppose
this
 notion. I too opine with
this
 stance that the healthcare system should be controlled by public authorities and the below essay will elaborate my viewpoint and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly
, the main reason stems from the fact that making
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medical organizations public, will clearly make
it
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 affordable to
lower class
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people
whereas
the
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private hospitals usually charge a lot of money for providing
services
,
thus
 making it impossible for poor or
lower class
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people
 to afford it.
For instance
, online data shows that 20% of patients are dying every year
due to
 the unaffordability of
services
 in private medical firms.
Secondly
, there will be a reduction in criminal activities with respect to healthcare
services
such
 as corruption or smuggling of organs.
For example
, It has been seen as a trend in private organizations, a number of doctors malpractice their authorization by forcing some patients to undergo expensive surgeries, which might not be required, for mere profits only.
On the other hand
, Government funded hospitals do not run for profits, and
instead
, truly look for the welfare of
people
. To recapitulate,
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making the hospitals public-funded; will be beneficial for
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society in terms of affordability and reduction in criminal activities. In my opinion,
government
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 should take responsibility for healthcare systems and make it subsidized for the community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental human right
  • equitable access
  • government-run healthcare
  • economies of scale
  • negotiate
  • healthcare costs
  • profit motives
  • compromised healthcare
  • health inequities
  • accountable
  • public health objectives
  • reinvest
  • infrastructure
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