The table below shows personal saving as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2010.
The table given illustrates the percentages of individual savings from personal income in 7 countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000.
The
overall
rate of savings was lower in 2000 rather than 1970 for each country, with just one exception for the UK, where the rate of money saved was higher. ,Moreover
the most substantial number of savings was registered in Italy in 1990 and the minor one in Canada, 30 years later.
If we make comparisons between 1970 and 1990, it can be noticed that Italy is ranked in first place in both years, but with a significant drop, from 29.5% to 17.6% throughout the period. France and Japan registered similar percentages in 1970, 18 %, and the same pattern can be noticed 20 years later with 12%
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, from 1990 to 2000 Canada shows a major difference from nearly 12 percent to no more than 1.9 % in just a decade. However
, France and Japan noticed a slight rose from 12 per cent to 13 % in the same period of time.Submitted by iftenevlad on
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