The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
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The charts compare the amount of
water
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used for
agriculture
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, industry and homes around the world, and
water
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use in
Brazil
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and the Democratic Republic of
Congo
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.
It is clear that
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global
water
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needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and that
agriculture
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accounted for the largest proportion of
water
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used. We can
also
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see that
water
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consumption
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was considerably higher in
Brazil
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than in the
Congo
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. In 1900, around 500km³ of
water
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was used by the
agriculture
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sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic
water
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consumption
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stood at around
one fifth
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of that amount. By 2000, global
water
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use for
agriculture
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had increased to around 3000km³, industrial
water
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use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic
consumption
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had reached approximately 500km³. In the year 2000, the populations of
Brazil
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and the
Congo
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were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively.
Water
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consumption
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per person in
Brazil
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, at 359m³, was much higher than that in the
Congo
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, at only 8m³, and
this
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could be explained by the fact that
Brazil
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had 265 times more irrigated land.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, agriculture, brazil, congo, consumption with synonyms.
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