The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map shows the
town
of Canterbury,
and the space Remove the comma
apply
that is
planned for a new school. The map represents two possible places for the school. Overall
, there is a countryside environment for site
1. Conversely
, site
2 is anticipated to be located in the urban area
. There is a main road along the area
.
At the first option site
, it is decided to be located in the countryside. It is located on the northeast side of the town
. Site
1 is 5 kilometres away from Sturry, where it is estimated a population of 7,000 people. To travel, people can use the main road to visit there. In this
area
, the location is on the side of the housing area
.
At another site
, it is expected to be located in the middle of the town
inside the town
centre. It is located below the University, which the main road cannot reach. In this
zone, there is no traffic to disturb the students because there is no traffic zone. This
area
is 7 kilometres away from Chartham. In Chartham, this
community has approximately 4,500 people in the area
, which is about half of that in Sturry.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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