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the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. summarize the information, and make aconparison .

the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. summarize the information, and make aconparison .
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This
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 provided table explains the percentage of spending of a family income each month on five items, which are
food
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 and
drink
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, clothing, housing, and entertainment in five European
countries
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
however
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, the differences in cost were observed among these
countries
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, all of them spent more money on housing,
food
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 and
drink
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 than others.
To begin
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, in, Turkey a family spent more than one-third of its income on
food
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 and
drink
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, at around 36%, which was the highest cost compared to the other
countries
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.
In contrast
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, in,
Germany
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 people paid only one-quarter of their monthly salary for
food
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 and
drink
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, which was considered above than
Germany
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, at 22%. But, in the UK the household was charged a higher ratio of their wages each month for housing, at just 37%, despite that housing in, Spain was the cheapest, at 18% . Regarding clothing and entertainment, in all of these,
countries
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 folk paid less monthly for both of them.
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, the cost of clothing in
Germany
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 was the highest, at 15%, when we compared it with the others.
Secondly
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, families in
Germany
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 preferred to enjoy, as; they spent, about 19% of their income on entertainment,
while
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 in Turkey, it was the
last
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 thing that the population spent on it, at 10%

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drink, countries, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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