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nations
should accept people
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from their homes and support them with basic accommodation and daily
life
. I agree that
this
statement because developing their
culture
and Correct word choice
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enhances
economicCorrect article usage
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growth of the country.
The development of
culture
in
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countries comes from helping poverty people
theyCorrect pronoun usage
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do not have essential
life
needs.
This thoseCorrect pronoun usage
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people fled from their homes
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in the rich
nations
they can easily live and get essential daily lives. So that, they can learn and interact with the local community mostly they adopt their
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,
also
social diversity come from different countries developing
theChange the word
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culture
.
For example
,
refugeeFix the agreement mistake
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liveWrong verb form
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in the USA often
they Correct pronoun usage
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try to teach and behave the ethos
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the local communities.
On the other hand
, when rich
nations
accept many refugees it improves their economic growth.
This
is because refugees get the basic
life
and immediately think
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they create something depending on their needs and attempt to start their own work, which causes the improvement of the business places.
Therefore
,
this
is because increasing
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demand and supply that goes up the insurance rate of the country and takes a part
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the rising
the Correct article usage
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finance that the government gets.
For instance
, in Canada, every business that personal or private
companiesFix the agreement mistake
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should pay
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insurance per year.
In conclusion, I agree that rich
nations
should allow the refugees and support them with essential
life
needs because of the improvement of social diversity
culture
and rising
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.