The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
The diagram depicts
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how
plastic
bottles
are recycled. There are
total
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of 9 processes that have to
followed
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to recycle
the
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plastic
bottles
.
The first step is
to throw all the
plastic
bottles
in the dustbin and
then
all the
plastic
bottles
are collected and transported to the recycling centre. After
taken
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to the recycling centre these
plastic
bottles
are sorted on which
bottles
can be used and which cannot be used. The fourth step is to compress these
bottles
into blocks and
then
they are crushed by the machines after that they are
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in a large container with water where these crushed
bottles
will be washed.
Then
the crushed bottle pieces are put into the other machine where
plastic
pellets are produced and through that
machine
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heating pellets come and form raw material. Using the raw material end products are made which
the
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last
stage of the process. In conclusion,
plastic
bottles
can be used to make wonderful products like tiffin boxes,
bottles
, shirts
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,
plastic
bags, etc.
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