There are millions of counterfeit products bought and sold each year worldwide, including fake brand name shoes, electronics and cosmetics. What are the reasons for this, and what are the solutions? Use explanations and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, it is very easy for
people
to buy fake and imitated products.
Hence
, the sales numbers are continuously increasing throughout the years. I believe there are various factors that can be responsible for
this
incident.
This
essay will provide some explanations to support my opinion. 
To begin
with,
people
who live the current lifestyle are constantly faced with judgement.
For example
, a university student, who wears branded stuff, is considered beautiful and has more friends.
In addition
, nowadays, more than 50% of women have to wear make-up before they go out,
otherwise
they will not feel confident.
Although
it is understandable that good quality clothes and shoes can boost someone's confidence.
However
, not all individuals can support
this
kind of lifestyle.
Therefore
, the marketing industries started to introduce counterfeit products so that
people
can look chic without having to spend a lot of money. One of the possible solutions to eradicate
this
is to give an understanding
to
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the teenager from an early age that
people
's worth is not valued by their phones or clothes.
In addition
, we
also
can introduce our young ones to a group of friends that do not care too much about the brand.
For example
, when I took an internship program in one of the laboratories in Japan, there is none of them wear anything branded. Yet in my university, almost 80% of students wear branded stuff.
To conclude
,
this
essay believes that one of the reasons
people
buy counterfeit products is because it's cheaper and they are in a position where they have to increase their value. Regarding the solutions, I believe that parents' role toward their loved ones is crucial to prevent
this
from happening.
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