The diagram shows how used glass bottles are recycled.

The diagram shows how used glass bottles are recycled.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows how used glass bottles are recycled.
The given picture illustrates the process of recycling
glass
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bottles
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.
It is clear that
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there are three stages in the recycling of used
glass
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bottles
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. The process begins with collecting used
bottles
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from consumers and ends with their re-used by customers. Looking at the process in detail, in the first stage, customers put off the used
bottles
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in the collection point of the recycle box, and
then
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, after the box is already full, it will be picked up by the truck.
Next,
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in the second stage, is the cleaning plant, where the used
bottles
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will be processed with
high pressurised
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water before continuing to the
glass
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factory, which is divided into three directions, green, brown, and clear. After passing into the
glass
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factory, the materials will be cut into pieces, which are
then
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heated in a furnace. After that, the pieces of materials were combined with liquid and new (liquid)
glass
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and
then
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became mould. The
last
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stage is that mould is filled or packed before being delivered to supermarkets to be re-used by consumers who buy
glass
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bottles
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-drinks.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, bottles with synonyms.
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