The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

These statistics illustrate the percentage of

Tv

and

Radio

audiences who were from the UK during a particular day in 1992.

Also

, they were over 4 years old.

Overall

, most of

folk

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would rather

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radio

in the morning,

while

there are several

Tv

viewers in the afternoon.

According to

the graph, the number of people who used the

Radio

increased significantly between 6AM and almost 9AM. which

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was the highest consumption with roughly 30% throughout the day.

Although

, the number of audiences there

were

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slight

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rise at 4PM so that, stood at just about 15%, the per cent of folk who used the

radio

drop off from 30% until close to 2% after midnight.

It is clear that

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the fluctuation of

TV

viewers soars sharply from almost 20% to approximately 50% between 4PM and 8PM.

Then

, there was a significant decline between 10PM to 2AM and stood at just 45% to nearly 2% respectively.

Moreover

, the percentage of people who used

TV

and

Radio

remained

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at about

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2% after 2AM until 6AM.