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The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.
#line #radio #television #audiences
These statistics illustrate the percentage of
Tv
 and
Radio
 audiences who were from the UK during a particular day in 1992.
Also
, they were over 4 years old.
Overall
, most of
folk
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the folk
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 would rather
used
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radio
 in the morning,
while
 there are several
Tv
 viewers in the afternoon.
According to
 the graph, the number of people who used the
Radio
 increased significantly between 6AM and almost 9AM. which
it
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was the highest consumption with roughly 30% throughout the day.
Although
, the number of audiences there
were
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was
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slight
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 rise at 4PM so that, stood at just about 15%, the per cent of folk who used the
radio
 drop off from 30% until close to 2% after midnight.
It is clear that
,
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 the fluctuation of
TV
 viewers soars sharply from almost 20% to approximately 50% between 4PM and 8PM.
Then
, there was a significant decline between 10PM to 2AM and stood at just 45% to nearly 2% respectively.
Moreover
, the percentage of people who used
TV
 and
Radio
 remained
about
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 2% after 2AM until 6AM.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tv, radio, pm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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