The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart and table illustrate the
number
of foreign students in universities in the USA, UK, Australia, and Canada in 2004 and after eight years. The measurements were in thousands.
Overall
,the number
of juniors abroad increased in each country,however
the percentage of them Add a comma
,however
of
all recruitment did not change so much. Change preposition
in
For instance
, USA's rates show a similar per cent in both years.
The differences between how many people from other countries study in UK and America raised by 100 000 till 2012, while
Australia's rates consisted of about 70 000 over the same years. On the other hand
, the number
of international students in Canada did not depict huge changes, it was a little bit less than 50 thousand in 2004 and grew by about 25 000.
There was only 2 per cent of foreign people of the total number
of undergraduates who had courses in the USA in 2004 and this
measurement stayed constant in 2012. Nevertheless
, the percentage of exchange students was 19 in Australia at the beginning of the timeline and it was up to 24 per cent at the end
. Moreover
, UK
demonstrated Correct article usage
the UK
the
growth of 4%, Correct article usage
a
whereas
Canada only 2%.Submitted by assiya.nurbergen18 on
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