In today's world,people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger.Why does this happen?Do you think it is positive or negative development?
Nowadays,
people
expend a big amount of money
on their appearance due to
the fact that they want to look like younger people
.In my point of view, this
happens because they want to look better among other old people
and I consider that it has both positive and negative development depending on the type of thing the money
is spent on.
Some people
might be scared of other older people
's looks as long as they may have lots of wrinkles
.This
reason-the fear of looking old might cause it to happen.For example
, I heard from my mom that she is scared to have wrinkles
and problems with her skin
imagining herself in the future.Spending quite enough money
on beauty cosmetics can solve this
problem,so that's the main reason for the fear of being considered as old.
This
might have a positive impact if the money
is paid for relevant skincare products.But at the same time, some issues such
as hazardous operations on a person's skin
which is not guaranteed to look younger might have a negative development.For instance
, ageing creams or some products for preventing wrinkles
before their appearance might help and bring happiness because the skin
is saved. Meanwhile paying a lot of money
on skin
operations might show a risk as long as it's not guaranteed to be looked younger.
To conclude
, people
pay lots of money
to look younger.In my opinion,the problem is because of the fear of having wrinkles
and it might have both positive and negative development on a person's life.Submitted by yusupovauldana65 on
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