You rent a house through an agency. The heating system has stopped working. You phoned the agency a week ago but it still has not been repaired. write a letter to agency. Explain the situation and tell them what you want them to do about it.

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your attention regarding

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.I, Joseph Shoffen rent a

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was hired through your agency. To commence with, In my

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the heating system has stopped working

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matter to your agency.

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the weather nowadays. It is too much cold

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and my wife has not able to do her household activities

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your company 8

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ago and they told me that they sent your worker to my

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for watching the matter but it has been 7

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and no one is coming to my

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serious problem for my family. I hope that you understand the whole

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response. Yours faithfully, Joseph Shoffen.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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