You rent a house through an agency. The heating system has stopped working. You phoned the agency a week ago but it still has not been repaired. write a letter to agency. Explain the situation and tell them what you want them to do about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am
wrtiting
Correct your spelling
writing
this
letter to drawing
your attention regarding Wrong verb form
draw
to
my Remove the preposition
apply
complain
.I, Joseph Shoffen rent a Replace the word
complaint
house
in
Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
apply
castel
street and Correct your spelling
castle
this
house
was hired through your agency.
To commence with, In my house
the heating system has stopped working Add a comma
,house
since
10 Change preposition
for
days
and i
informed Change the capitalization
I
this
matter to your agency.Correct pronoun usage
you this
Moreover
, you are aware about
the weather nowadays. It is too much cold Change the preposition
of
out side
. Correct your spelling
outside
Thus
, my house
became freezer
and my wife has not able to do her household activities Correct article usage
a freezer
as well as
my children are ill due to
this
cold.
I phoned in
your company 8 Change preposition
apply
days
ago and they told me that they sent your worker to my house
within 2 days
for watching the matter but it has been 7 days
and no one is coming to my house
. Therefore
, It is very
serious problem for my family.
I hope that you understand the whole Add an article
a very
senario
and do some steps as soon as possible and Correct your spelling
scenario
sent
your mechanics.
Waiting for your Change the form of the verb
send
quicker
response.
Yours faithfully,
Joseph Shoffen.Replace the word
quick
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