The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph highlights the
year
between 2010 and 2017 Use synonyms
number
of visitors Use synonyms
in
a Caribbean Change preposition
to
island
. In Use synonyms
total
Change the article
a total
the total
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
Use synonyms
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
upwarding
; Correct your spelling
upward
upwards
however
, Linking Words
visitors
staying on Correct article usage
the visitors
Use synonyms
island
are decreasing in the rate.
In a nutshell, In the Add an article
the island
year
Use synonyms
2010
no one stayed in the ship till 2013. Add a comma
,2010
In other words
, the curve is showing the minus Linking Words
visitor's
percentage till the Change noun form
visitor
year
2013. From 2014 staying in the ship's graph line was increasing till 2017.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
tourists
who spent their nights Use synonyms
in
the Change preposition
on
island
Use synonyms
was
not very famous either in 2010; Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Although
, From the Linking Words
year
2013 people started passing their nights Use synonyms
in
the Change preposition
on
island
. And, Use synonyms
this
trend was Linking Words
upwarding
till 2014. Unless, in the Correct your spelling
upward
upwards
year
2016 the trending was failed Use synonyms
into
1.25 Change preposition
to
million
. Use synonyms
Whereas
visitor Linking Words
of
the ships was 1.5 Change preposition
to
million
in the same Use synonyms
year
. Between 2015 to 2016 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
tourists
who stayed Use synonyms
in
the ships and who spent their nights Change preposition
on
in
the Change preposition
on
island
are intersecting Use synonyms
each
other. When the Change preposition
with each
number
of percentage of Use synonyms
the
people who stayed Correct article usage
apply
in
the Change preposition
on
island
was Use synonyms
decreaed
by .25 Correct your spelling
decreased
created
million
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
visitor's
percentage was increased by .50 Change noun form
visitors
million
.
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In addition
, in total the Linking Words
number
of tourist trend was Use synonyms
uptrending
. From 2010 to 2017 the rate of Correct your spelling
trending
the
Correct article usage
apply
tourists
was 1 Use synonyms
million
to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, number, island, tourists, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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