The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The given bar chart provides information about the top ten countries, in terms of manufacturing and consumption rates of

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in 2014.

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China and USA were the leaders in these statistics. Meanwhile, the figure of Korea Rep. was the lowest among all 10 participants.

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the graph, the figures

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both Russia and Japan were approximately at the same level of 1000

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kWh

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. At the same time, the figures

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manufacturing and consuming

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in China were nearly 5400

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and 5300

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kWh

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respectively. The proportions of

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were slightly lower than in China, at nearly 4000

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kWh

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in both cases.

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, in 9 countries except Germany, the statistics

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production were higher than those

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consumption,

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the

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rate in Germany exceeded the production rates of 3 states, namely France, Brazil and Korea Rep.

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, in Canada the amounts of

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produced and consumed were roughly 620 and 500 kilo Watts per hour respectively.

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the amount of

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manufactured was 871 kilo Watts per hour,

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consumed was considerably lower, at approximately 700 kilo Watts per hour.