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Task 2: Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are people who believe that some jobs suit
men
 better and others that suit
women
 better
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 because different sexes have different qualities. From my perspective, I totally disagree with that. and
this
 essay will discuss my viewpoint in detail with reasons and relevant examples. First of all, intelligence has no matter to do with gender. In the past, it is a well-known and widely lamented fact that
men
 outnumber
women
 in a number of fields in STEM (science, technology, engineering and math). These fields are considered to require high intelligence. But over time, there are more and more
women
 scientists who have made great contributions to scientific progress,
such
 as Madame Curie and Tu Youyou, who won the Nobel Prize in Medicine.
This
 indicates that certain differences in the past were not
due to
 innate qualities.
Secondly
, with the development of machines,
men
's advantages in power will gradually disappear, which means that heavy physical work
that is
 only suitable for
men
 will gradually disappear. In the past, people needed to use
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 their hands to dig the mine and to move things by themselves. But now, we use excavators and trucks. In the future, we will only sit in front of the computer screen and tap the keyboard, and these things will all be solved.
Thirdly
,
Men
 can work as patiently as
women
. It is a stereotype that most
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men
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can not tolerate an irritating situation for a long time. But
this
 is not a natural quality in
men
.
Men
 are generally considered to have a stronger ability to withstand harm than
women
 Most parents do not treat boys with the same tenderness as
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girls when they educate their children. So they developed
this
 personality when they were young.
To sum up
, it is undeniable that some unchangeable parts lie in the body of males and females,
nevertheless
, it shouldn’t be the excuse for dividing humankind into groups. everyone can have a fair chance
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 getting a job.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender roles
  • inherent qualities
  • social dynamics
  • merit-based selection
  • advancements in technology
  • levelled the playing field
  • gender stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • physical differences
  • workplace
  • evolving
  • traditional view
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