Task 2: Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are people who believe that some jobs suit

men

better and others that suit

women

better

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because different sexes have different qualities. From my perspective, I totally disagree with that. and

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essay will discuss my viewpoint in detail with reasons and relevant examples. First of all, intelligence has no matter to do with gender. In the past, it is a well-known and widely lamented fact that

men

outnumber

women

in a number of fields in STEM (science, technology, engineering and math). These fields are considered to require high intelligence. But over time, there are more and more

women

scientists who have made great contributions to scientific progress,

such

as Madame Curie and Tu Youyou, who won the Nobel Prize in Medicine.

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indicates that certain differences in the past were not

due to

innate qualities.

Secondly

, with the development of machines,

men

's advantages in power will gradually disappear, which means that heavy physical work

that is

only suitable for

men

will gradually disappear. In the past, people needed to use

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their hands to dig the mine and to move things by themselves. But now, we use excavators and trucks. In the future, we will only sit in front of the computer screen and tap the keyboard, and these things will all be solved.

Thirdly

,

Men

can work as patiently as

women

. It is a stereotype that most

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men

do not have

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, and

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can not tolerate an irritating situation for a long time. But

this

is not a natural quality in

men

.

Men

are generally considered to have a stronger ability to withstand harm than

women

Most parents do not treat boys with the same tenderness as

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girls when they educate their children. So they developed

this

personality when they were young.

To sum up

, it is undeniable that some unchangeable parts lie in the body of males and females,

nevertheless

, it shouldn’t be the excuse for dividing humankind into groups. everyone can have a fair chance

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getting a job.