The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of sustainable energy
in total energy
production in 4 particular countries from 1997 to 2010.
Overall
,Iceland
was the countries
that had Fix the agreement mistake
country
largest
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the largest
proportion
of sustainable energy
in three
examined years,1997,2000 and 2010.Correct article usage
the three
Additionally
,Sweaden
and Correct your spelling
Sweden
iceland
had an upward trend Change the capitalization
Iceland
about
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in
proportion
of sustainable Add an article
the proportion
energy
over 13 years.
In 1997,among
half of Change preposition
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total
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the total
energy
from Iceland
was come from renewable energy
.This
figure continued to climb steadily to 60% in2000
and more than 70% in 2010.Meanwhile,Sweden had only approximately 5% of the entire amount of renewable Correct your spelling
in 2000
energy
come from total energy
in 1997.It experienced similar
trend Correct article usage
a similar
with
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to
Iceland
,
and had 7% and 9% in 2000 and 2010 separately.
Regarding Australia,nearly 10% of Remove the comma
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energy
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the energy
that
was produced from natural resources in 1997.Correct pronoun usage
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However
,it got slightly dropped over examined years and bacame
7% Correct your spelling
became
in2000
and 5% Correct your spelling
in 2000
in2010
.At the Correct your spelling
in 2010
last
,Turkey was the
special country with Correct article usage
a
unique
figure.It had 38% of Correct article usage
a unique
proportion
of sustainable Add an article
the proportion
energy
in 1997 and had a slightly
growth to over 40% in 2000,and had significantly decreased to 33% in 2010.Change the adverb
slight
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