The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015.
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The line graphs illustrate the information about the number of citizens who subscribed to mobile and fixed phone lines between the years 2005 and 2015 in four different countries.
Overall
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, The community who had mobile phone contribution per hundred people drastic changes throughout the period
whereas
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the population who had fixed telephone subscriptions per hundred population remained consistent throughout the decade. The first line graph shows that the number of mobile phones per person increased in India and Uruguay in the year 2005 they were at 10 and 40 each respectively ,
However
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following the years the values started to build up quickly and reached 150 in Uruguay and around 75 in India where the numbers remained constant in Countries
such
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as the United Kingdom and Eritrea. The UK stayed at approximately around 100 and Eritrea with the lowest count at 0. The fixed telephone subscriptions per 100 society did not see much change during the following years 2005 and 2015 and were constant throughout the decade With India and Eritrea with the lowest count of 0 and 5
Whereas
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People in the United Kingdom had the highest number of Still telephone subscriptions around 55 and Uruguay being consistent around 30.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subscriptions
  • mobile phone
  • fixed phone
  • increase
  • significant
  • rise
  • stable
  • pronounced
  • contrast
  • decline
  • steadily
  • highest
  • gradual
  • dramatic
  • usage
  • general
  • surpass
  • end of the period
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