The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The given line chart was selected from a 2008 report that illustrates the
consumption
of six different fuel energies in the USA during
1980 to 2030.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, the data from that report shows the trend of five fuel energies except hydropower are
upward. Change the verb form
is
Moreover
, petrol and oil is
the most energy Correct subject-verb agreement
are
that is
used by people in the USA. However
, nuclear, solar/wind,
and hydropower are at the bottom of Remove the comma
apply
energy
types that people consume.
The Correct article usage
the energy
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
consumption
of petrol and oil fluctuated between 35 from 1980 to 32 in 1995. After that
it was a sharp rise until 2023, at 45. Add a comma
,that
Moreover
, it is predicted that consumption
may reach 50 quadrillion.
For coal and natural gas
the Add a comma
,gas
consumption
number started at 15 and 20 respectively. Between 1980 to 2015 the
both of which had a fluctuation and coal took over the natural gas. It is estimated that the trend of coal might be upward and reach more than 30, Correct article usage
apply
while
for natural gas this
trend may remain steady. For other types of energy consumption
namely, nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower their trends are very close to each other.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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