The diagrams below show one way in which sand dunes' are formed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show one way in which sand dunes' are formed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male

comparisons where relevant.
The following diagrams illustrate the formation of a
sand
dune from
sand
particles
.
Overall
, the entire three stages of generation reveal that
sand
particles
are indeed propelled by the
wind
over
dry
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the dry
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ground
in order to
further
gather on
wet
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the wet
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ground
which in turn causes them to congregate and produce
sand
dunes The first diagram displays the process of how
sand
particles
are blown by the
wind
over
a
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dry and sandy
ground
as well as
a pair of wet
ground
.
This
is frequently followed by the second diagram where it is
bserved
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observed
that as time passes,
particles
continue to be moved by the
wind
along the
ground
. A portion of these
particles
begin
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to stick to the initial patch of wet
ground
in distinct independent piles. The final diagram which illustrates the
sand
particles
that have been shifted by the
wind
, eventually gather in masses over an area of wet
ground
. These masses pile on top of one another until it forms a
sand
dune. These accumulated
sand
particles
are so immense in size,
once
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formed possess the ability to deter
wind
and force it up along
on
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side of the
sand
dune and down the other. During
this
process,
particles
of
sand
begin to gather and occupy the next available area of wet
ground
.
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