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The diagrams below show one way in which sand dunes' are formed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show one way in which sand dunes' are formed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.
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The following diagrams illustrate the formation of a
sand
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 dune from
sand
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particles
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.
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, the entire three stages of generation reveal that
sand
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particles
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 are indeed propelled by the
wind
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 over
dry
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the dry
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ground
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 in order to
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 gather on
wet
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the wet
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ground
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 which in turn causes them to congregate and produce
sand
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 dunes The first diagram displays the process of how
sand
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particles
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 are blown by the
wind
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 over
a
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dry and sandy
ground
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as well as
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 a pair of wet
ground
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.
This
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 is frequently followed by the second diagram where it is
bserved
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observed
 that as time passes,
particles
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 continue to be moved by the
wind
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 along the
ground
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. A portion of these
particles
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begin
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 to stick to the initial patch of wet
ground
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 in distinct independent piles. The final diagram which illustrates the
sand
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particles
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 that have been shifted by the
wind
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, eventually gather in masses over an area of wet
ground
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. These masses pile on top of one another until it forms a
sand
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 dune. These accumulated
sand
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particles
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 are so immense in size,
once
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that once
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 formed possess the ability to deter
wind
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 and force it up along
on
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one
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 side of the
sand
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 dune and down the other. During
this
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 process,
particles
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 of
sand
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 begin to gather and occupy the next available area of wet
ground
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sand, particles, wind, ground with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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