The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the daily
time
each day that Chinese
, American
, Turkish and Brazilian
visitors spent doing entertainment activities while
on vacation in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, Chinese
and American
tourists
allocated the most time
to reading books. In contrasted
to the two countries mentioned above, visitors of Turkish and Change the form of the verb
contrast
Brazilian
preferred spending their time
at the beach. All tourists
of
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from
four
countries, basically, spent the least of their free Correct article usage
the four
time
on
visiting places in Greece.
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apply
Chinese
and American
travelers
dedicated the most Change the spelling
travellers
time
to reading books. More specifically, Chinese
tourists
spent 8 hours
per day to
reading which was higher than Change preposition
apply
American’s
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American
travelers
, just about 5 Change the spelling
travellers
hours
on this
activity. Moreover
, Chinese
visitors spent 3 hours
at the beach, which was fewer than American’s
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American
tourists
in the same activity. Finally
, Chinese
tourists
spent only 1 hours
visiting places in Greece, Change to a singular noun
hour
while
American
spent 3 Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
hours
on this
entertainment.
On the other hand
, the most
leisure activities that Correct quantifier usage
apply
travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
of
both countries Turkish and Change preposition
from
Brazilian
spending
the highest Replace the word
spent
time
was
Change preposition
on was
the
entertainment at the beach, with 5 and 6 Correct article usage
apply
hours
respectively. Last
but not least, the number of hours
Turkish’s
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Turkish
travelers
spending for visiting places was 3 Change the spelling
travellers
hours
which was about 1 hour more than tourists
from Brazilian
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