The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays the
number
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of
tourists
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that visited an unnamed Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017. The
tourists
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are divided into two groups – those staying on
cruise
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ships
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and those staying on the
island
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itself – and these had a loosely inverse correlation. The total
number
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of visitors,
however
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, rose more or less continuously throughout the eight-year period. In the first year recorded, which was 2010, there were about twice as many
tourists
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staying on the
island
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as those staying on
cruise
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ships
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. A year later, the
number
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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doubled to a half
million
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, but
this
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dropped back to around a quarter
million
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in 2012. When the figures for
tourists
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on
cruise
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ships
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dropped, the
number
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staying on the
island
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rose quickly and over the coming few years, as
this
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sudden increase levelled off, the
number
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of people who stayed onboard their ship continued to grow again. Between 2012 and 2017, there were more and more visitors staying on
cruise
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ships
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. From just a quarter
million
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,
this
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rose to two
million
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,
while
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the figures for those on the
island
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levelled off at just one and a half
million
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and
then
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dropped slightly in the penultimate year, before finishing at one and a half.
This
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meant that, for the final two years, more
tourists
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stayed on
cruise
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ships
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than on the
island
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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