The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the
number
of
tourists
that visited an unnamed Caribbean
island
between 2010 and 2017. The
tourists
are divided into two groups – those staying on
cruise
ships
and those staying on the
island
itself – and these had a loosely inverse correlation. The total
number
of visitors,
however
, rose more or less continuously throughout the eight-year period. In the first year recorded, which was 2010, there were about twice as many
tourists
staying on the
island
as those staying on
cruise
ships
. A year later, the
number
staying on
cruise
ships
doubled to a half
million
, but
this
dropped back to around a quarter
million
in 2012. When the figures for
tourists
on
cruise
ships
dropped, the
number
staying on the
island
rose quickly and over the coming few years, as
this
sudden increase levelled off, the
number
of people who stayed onboard their ship continued to grow again. Between 2012 and 2017, there were more and more visitors staying on
cruise
ships
. From just a quarter
million
,
this
rose to two
million
,
while
the figures for those on the
island
levelled off at just one and a half
million
and
then
dropped slightly in the penultimate year, before finishing at one and a half.
This
meant that, for the final two years, more
tourists
stayed on
cruise
ships
than on the
island
.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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