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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials. What are the reasons and some potential solutions?

#countries #waste #materials
Recycling of
waste
materials
 is an effective solution to prevent pollution of land, air, and sea. Nowadays, many countries have added the knowledge of 3R; Reuse, Recycle, and Reduce to
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education from kindergarten to universities for the purpose of educating its
people
 about 3R to reduce the pollution on earth.
However
, there are some countries that did not recycle enough
waste
materials
 and below is the reason and some potential solutions. There are many reasons
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why a country
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 not have enough recycling of
waste
materials
 and one of the reason is
due to
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the lack of awareness
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 recycling in that country. By lack of awareness, it can be that
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people
 are not educated or informed about recycling
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young
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 which causes the
people
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not
have
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 the habit of recycling
waste
materials
. Or there are not enough posters or advertisements on the billboard or televisions to promote the way of recycling and the advantages of recycling
waste
materials
.
Therefore
, the potential solutions for
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 of recycling of
waste
materials
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on
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 the government and
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social media.
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government
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 is a key solution for recycling
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because
government
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 have the authority to impose
knowldge
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knowledge
 of recycling
to
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 kids and students by having the television
to
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include
recycling related
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 advertisement and adding a curriculum or session that teaches young kids and students about recycling. And social media is able to impose the knowledge of recycling
waste
materials
 to a huge amount of
people
aruond
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around
 the globe as social
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 target
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 are very diverse.
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