The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The mentioned line graph illustrates the
figure
for patients
who visit four clinics (including birth
control
, eye
, diabetic, and dental) in one hospital between 2010 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of people
visiting the hospital on a weekly basis for eye
, diabetic, and dental check-ups increased over a period
of 6 years, while
this
figure
for birth
control
patients
decreased. At the beginning of the period
, the clinic for birth
control
received the highest data
. However
, in the end, it was eye
patients
that visit the hospital the most.
In the first two years, the data
of people
checking up for birth
control
, eye
, and diabetes rose from around 250, 125, and 60 to nearly 300, 150, and 100 respectively. Meanwhile, the figure
for dental patients
dropped from 100 to approximately 50 in the same period
.
In the next two years, except for the number of birth
control
patients
that decreased significantly to below 200, there was a double increase recorded in the data
for eye
and dental patients
. At the same time, the data
for the diabetic remained unchanged.
At the end
of the period
, the rate of eye
patients
reached its peak at 350 people
. The same tendency was applied to diabetic patients
with nearly 200 people
. People
who want to have birth
control
check-ups, on the other hand
, went back to the same figure
in 2010. Whereas
, only the rate of dental patients
maintained stably.Submitted by Soobinsj13
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