The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The mentioned line graph illustrates the
figure
for
patients
who visit four clinics (including
birth
control
,
eye
, diabetic, and dental) in one hospital between 2010 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of
people
visiting the hospital on a weekly basis for
eye
, diabetic, and dental check-ups increased over a
period
of 6 years,
while
this
figure
for
birth
control
patients
decreased. At the beginning of the
period
, the clinic for
birth
control
received the highest
data
.
However
, in the end, it was
eye
patients
that visit the hospital the most. In the first two years, the
data
of
people
checking up for
birth
control
,
eye
, and diabetes rose from around 250, 125, and 60 to nearly 300, 150, and 100 respectively. Meanwhile, the
figure
for dental
patients
dropped from 100 to approximately 50 in the same
period
. In the next two years, except for the number of
birth
control
patients
that decreased significantly to below 200, there was a double increase recorded in the
data
for
eye
and dental
patients
. At the same time, the
data
for the diabetic remained unchanged.
At the end
of the
period
, the rate of
eye
patients
reached its peak at 350
people
. The same tendency was applied to diabetic
patients
with nearly 200
people
.
People
who want to have
birth
control
check-ups,
on the other hand
, went back to the same
figure
in 2010.
Whereas
, only the rate of dental
patients
maintained stably.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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