a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He /she has ask for your advice Write the letter to your friend in your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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Dear
nisha
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, I haven't seen you for a long time so I am very excited to meet you. know
your
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going to
coming
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this
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summer
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for the first time. I am very happy
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about that
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I am
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some advice.
Camping
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holiday is a wonderful idea.Especially
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summer
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.I think not only do you want to
going
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camping
holiday
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in
summer
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but
also
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of people because
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best
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time for people to enjoy
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life after
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to see the views and meet a
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of people.
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a chance for you to understand more
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culture
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in our country which you have never
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before.the other reason is that you can take part you can in some social activities which are very interesting.
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, going camping in the
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of disadvantages. In the first place, It will have
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impact on your skin so you have to
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hot before you going
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outside.
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is quite hot so you have to prepare medicines before. I hope that you can go on a camping holiday with me. Hope to meet you soon. Your close friend
Manusha
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Manisha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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