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Some people feel that playing computer games has a negative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it has a positive impact. Discuss both views.

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Nowadays, we can not decline technology
such
 as the
computer
 is the main component we used daily. The population programs are
computer
games
 that are used for entertainment when you want to relax.
Although
 the majority of people agree that there are many negative on children for their health and communication skills. there is some dispute that there is a positive
side
 when you played
video
games
.
Therefore
 both sides of view will be discussed, and
then
 I will give my perspective. On the one
side
 of the argument, there is a variety of reasons why children in
this
 century are delighted to play
computer
games
, I am one of the people be like to play
video
games
, there are communities of friends and more entertainment when want to relax after heavy work. Everyone knows that playing
video
games
 for a long
time
 that bad for their health. Another special point consideration, in
this
 case,
this
 case is that makes your impact the negative
side
 of communication skills.
On the other hand
, some parents thought there are advantage
side
, if they can manage their
time
 to spend on it. You must exercise more when you play
video
games
 at the
computer
 for a long
time
.
Moreover
, some
computer
games
 have to be played with a team that can improve your communication skill and how to play
this
 round. For the reason mentioned above, there are both of views advantage and disadvantage
side
 in my opinion, the
computer
games
 are many positive sides ,
however
Add a comma
,however
show examples
 you have to manage your
time
 and take care of yourself.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Obesity
  • Social Isolation
  • Aggression
  • Academic performance
  • Gaming addiction
  • Cognitive skills
  • Problem-solving
  • Stress relief
  • Cultural awareness
  • Social interaction
  • Multitasking
  • Virtual worlds
  • Hand-eye coordination
  • Teamwork
  • Digital literacy
  • Innovative technology
  • E-sports
  • Moderation
  • Parental supervision
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