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Thanks to the development of air travel and telecommunication, contacts between different parts of the world have developed To what extent do you agree or disagree

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People
 were
traveling
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 and
conecting
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connecting
 with
the
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others since ancient times, but
invention
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 of the new technologies
as
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a
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 phone,
internet
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the internet
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 and new transportation systems made
huge
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 difference since it became much easier to reach long distances. I agree that
inovations
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innovations
 in communication and travel systems made a big difference and helped in building relations between
distanced
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 areas, so
for instance
,
nowdays
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nowadays
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 there are a lot of
people
 that are working from their homes for companies that are based in other countries or even on other
continets
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continents
.
Except that
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 we are able to travel very long distances in
very
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 short time thanks to
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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, so it is easier for
people
 to visit different countries and exchange experiences in professional meaning, but
also
 to stay close to friends or family that moved abroad. Internet, among other things, gave us
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possiblity
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possibility
 to meet and stay in touch with
people
 that are based far away from us, so
people
 are more keen to make new relationships.
On the other hand
, during the COVID
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pandemic
pandemy
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 we
relized
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realized
realised
 that globalization can have negative effects too
,
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 since we had a lot of cases of spreading of
disease
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the disease
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 during
the
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international trips.
Also
, we are witnesses
of
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to
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 numerous negative effects of
internet
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the internet
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,
such
 as security issues, lack of privacy,
behavioral
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 problems in kids, etc. In conclusion, air travel and telecommunication contributed to forming connections and contacts between different parts of
globe
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the globe
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, but we still need
be
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 aware of possible negative sides that are coming with those and try to mitigate their effects.
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