The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
The map diagram illustrates the anticipated changes for the village of Bunborough in the year 2024.
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, it can be seen that the government will be relocating houses and a railway track will be built in future for transportation purposes. The main contrasting feature in the coming years will be that the local community are going to get various new opportunities to earn money via jobs that will be created in 2024.
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, we can see that there are going to be 2 new hotels which will create more employment for the people residing in the area. The government are going to move a few of the houses for the construction of the train track and shift them to the northern side of the map. The shopping centre of the village remains at the same old place and has not been changed in the future, the fishing port present is not seen in eventual and has been changed into a promenade. ,
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most of the things still remain the same as they were in the forthcoming.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • village
  • present day
  • plans
  • 2024
  • overview
  • key differences
  • road network
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • recreational spaces
  • impact
  • environment
  • benefits
  • challenges
  • proposed changes
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