A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
New factories often bring many good things to a community,
such
as jobs and increased prosperity. However
, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory
are outweighed by the risks. That is
why I oppose the plan to build a factory
near my community. I believe that this
city would be harmed by a large factory
. In particular
, a factory
would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory
is not worth that rise. Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory
. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this
much growth
, so fast? If our town is going in growth
, I would prefer slow growth
with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered. I believe that this
growth
will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also
easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I mould miss that greatly. A factory
would be helpful in some ways. However
, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory
here,
and hope that others feel the same way.Remove the comma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite