The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart gives
information
about the
percentage
of corporations making
purchases
in manufacturing,
construction
, wholesale, retail, and
information
and communications from 2015 to 2019.
Overall
the
percentage
of the
purchases
of
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information
and communications is the highest between
the
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manufacturing, retail,
construction
, and wholesale,
the
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and the
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lowest purchase
percentage
between
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among
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the other categories is
the
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Retail. Regarding the
proporation
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proportion
preparation
of the
purchases
of
the
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manufacturing and
construction
, in 2015 it stood at 31% and 23% respectively. In 2016, the
purchases
of
the
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manufacturing increased more than
the
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construction
to nearly 51% and 30% respectively. The
purchases
of
the
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manufacturing and
construction
increase
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over the period until 2019,
it
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stood at almost 58% and 55% respectively. With regard to the
percentage
of
the
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purchases
of wholesale and retail, in 2015 it stood at nearly 41% and 32% respectively. In 2016 the
percentage
of
the
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wholesale went up gradually to 50% and the retail
increase
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increased
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sharply to nearly 51%, in 2017 and 2018 they stayed the same. After that in 2019, the
percentage
of
the
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wholesale
increase
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increased
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more than the retail to nearly 63% and 55% respectively. In terms of the
percentage
of
the
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apply
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information
and communications, in 2015, it stood at nearly 61%. In 2016 and 2017 it almost remained the same
to
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at
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70%, in 2018 it went up slowly to 75%.
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of the
period
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it decreased to almost 69% in 2019.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words information, percentage, purchases, construction with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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