The pie chart illustrates the pivotal ground that negatively affects the productivity of agricultural land while the table shows information about the proportion of land degradation due to those effects categorized in three separate areas of the world within the 1990s period.

The pie chart illustrates the pivotal ground that negatively affects the productivity of agricultural land while the table shows information about the proportion of land degradation due to those effects categorized in three separate areas of the world within the 1990s period.
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The diagrams illustrate the outline plans in terms of two separate types of student rooms including the double
room
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and the single
room
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at an Australian university.
Overall
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, the
room
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for two students is larger and more prohibitive. Apart from that, there is the emergence of several newly-built furniture in the double
room
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compared to the single counterpart. Regarding the
room
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for one person, it can be seen that it costs $200 per week to live in
this
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room
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which measures 6 by 2.5 metres. There is a bed which is adjacent to a study desk and a bookshelf.
Additionally
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, a full set of kitchen appliances is located in the bottom left corner of the
room
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, facing the bathroom and next to a TV.
According to
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the plans of the
room
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designed for 2 occupants, it has the same length of 6 metres and
slightly
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a slightly
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wider width
with
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of
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4 metres. Students have to pay $350 per week to rent. There are several similarities in the position of the bathroom,
the
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bed 1 and study desk 1. The TV is arranged opposite
to
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the set of a table and two chairs.
Furthermore
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, the 2nd bed and study desk
emerge
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in the bottom right corner of the
room
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • land degradation
  • soil erosion
  • deforestation
  • overgrazing
  • excessive use of chemical fertilizers
  • poor irrigation practices
  • drought
  • desertification
  • climate change
  • loss of fertility
  • comparative analysis
  • agricultural activities
  • biodiversity
  • food security
  • socio-economic impacts
  • remedial measures
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