The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
The bar chart depicts the population of part-time workers in certain countries of the United Kingdom in the years 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, Wales has been the country that stayed the highest in both years. In 1980 Scotland has the less proportion but has increased in 2010 and put Northern Ireland at the lowest percentage.
According to
the chart, Wales has the most fraction in both 1980 and 2010 by 32%
along with
35%. Moving on to England with 26% in 1980
as well as
31% through 2010 and remains as second.
However
, Northern Ireland hang around as the homeland with the third place in the year 1980 by 15% but decreased to 13% in 2010.
Then
we have Scotland with the lowest rate in 1980 with only 12% as for that it has accelerated to 19% by 2010 and replaced Northern Ireland in third place on the bar chart.
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