The chart below shows purchase levels of four meats in the UK from 1974 to 2011

The chart below shows purchase levels of four meats in the UK from 1974 to 2011
The line graph illustrates how much
chicken
,
beef
,
pork
and
lamb
British citizens bought between 1974 and 2011. Units are measured in grams per person per day.
Overall
, the most striking feature is that the consumption of all types of meat decreased over the period, with the exception of
chicken
, which by 2011 had overtaken
beef
in terms of the most popular meat.
Also
,
pork
and
lamb
remained the least popular meats, but had reversed positions by 2011.
Beef
and
chicken
were the most common types of meat in 1974,
however
,
while
beef
stood at just under 200g,
chicken
was at the level of around 125g. Over the next twenty years
beef
plummeted and hit a trough at roughly 90g in the 1980s, but
then
stabilised and recovered to amount to around 110g in 2011.
In contrast
,
chicken
experienced a surge, overtaking
beef
in 1997 and
then
increasing slightly more to just under 200g in 2011, the same level as
beef
at the beginning of the period. As for
lamb
and
pork
, they had a similar pattern of decline and had nearly halved by 2011.
Lamb
, which, in turn, stood at the same point as
chicken
in 1974, saw a slight rise in the early 1980s but dropped dramatically to just under 50g in 2011.
Likewise
,
pork
, which was at
the
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level of just under 100g in 1974, rose insignificantly in the 1980s and
then
had
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plummeted to just over 50g by 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chicken, beef, pork, lamb, g with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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