The line graph gives information about the quantity of UK residents using three types of the transportation each day from 1970 to 2030.

The line graph gives information about the quantity of UK residents using three types of the transportation each day from 1970 to 2030.
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The line graph gives information about the quantity of UK residents using three types of
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transportation each day from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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the
number
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of commuters using
cars
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and
trains
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rose
while
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the figure for buses tended to decrease over the period of 60 years. Another interesting point is that
cars
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were the most favoured kind of transportation. In 1970, there were around 5
million
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using
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cars
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whereas
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the
number
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of citizens travelling by bus and train stood at 4 and 2
million
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respectively. British people saw a gradual increase in using
trains
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in 2010 to 3
million
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.
Although
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the
number
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of UK people using buses was higher than that of
trains
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, they still declined slightly from 1970 to 2010. In 2030, the
number
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of commuters using buses is predicted to be lower than that of
trains
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and
cars
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, just below 3
million
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. Using
cars
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will reach about 9
million
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,
while
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just 5
million
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of
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commuters used
trains
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cars, trains, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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