The line graph gives information about the quantity of UK residents using three types of the transportation each day from 1970 to 2030.

The line graph gives information about the quantity of UK residents using three types of the transportation each day from 1970 to 2030.
The line graph gives information about the quantity of UK residents using three types of
the
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transportation each day from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
,
It is clear that
the
number
of commuters using
cars
and
trains
rose
while
the figure for buses tended to decrease over the period of 60 years. Another interesting point is that
cars
were the most favoured kind of transportation. In 1970, there were around 5
million
using
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cars
whereas
the
number
of citizens travelling by bus and train stood at 4 and 2
million
respectively. British people saw a gradual increase in using
trains
in 2010 to 3
million
.
Although
the
number
of UK people using buses was higher than that of
trains
, they still declined slightly from 1970 to 2010. In 2030, the
number
of commuters using buses is predicted to be lower than that of
trains
and
cars
, just below 3
million
. Using
cars
will reach about 9
million
,
while
just 5
million
of
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commuters used
trains
.
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