The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The data provides information
of
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the
salaries
given to the Secondary/High school teachers from different countries in the year 2009.
Overall
, the minimum starting
salaries
of most of the
coutries
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countries
were average
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Luxembourg which had the
most
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highest starting
salaries
as well as
the maximum reaching
salaries
. Australia and Korea have only
2,000
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difference
on
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their starting
salaries
and not only that even after 15 years of experience, both countries
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the same pay amount. To reach the pinnacle salary point
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and Australia
has
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to be less than 10 years of experience. Luxembourg and Japan
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the highest paid maximum
salaries
compared to the other nations.
Although
there's a difference in starting
salaries
in these two countries
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the average reaching maximum salary is more than 30 years of
expertises
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in the teaching field. Comparatively, the highest pay scale after reaching the
surrmount
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surmount
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is none other than Luxembourg and the least pay scale provider is
the
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Australia.
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