The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The data provides information
of
the Change preposition
on
salaries
given to the Secondary/High school teachers from different countries in the year 2009. Overall
, the minimum starting salaries
of most of the coutries
were average Correct your spelling
countries
unlike
Luxembourg which had the Add the comma(s)
,unlike
most
highest starting Change the adjective
apply
salaries
as well as
the maximum reaching salaries
.
Australia and Korea have only 2,000
difference Correct article usage
a 2,000
on
their starting Change preposition
in
salaries
and not only that even after 15 years of experience, both countries resembles
the same pay amount. To reach the pinnacle salary point Correct subject-verb agreement
resemble
denmark
and Australia Change the capitalization
Denmark
has
to be less than 10 years of experience.
Luxembourg and Japan Change the verb form
have
has
the highest paid maximum Change the verb form
have
salaries
compared to the other nations. Although
there's a difference in starting salaries
in these two countries but
the average reaching maximum salary is more than 30 years of Remove the conjunction
apply
expertises
in the teaching field.
Comparatively, the highest pay scale after reaching the Correct your spelling
expertise
surrmount
is none other than Luxembourg and the least pay scale provider is Correct your spelling
surmount
surround
the
Australia.Correct article usage
apply
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