The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The given chart illustrates the
percentage
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of accommodation which were owned and rented by
households
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011
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, at the beginning of the period, rented housings were dominant over owned.
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, both of them showed an opposite trend and in the end, the
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of owned apartments took over the rented ones. In 1918, the number of
households
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owning accommodations was considerably low than that rented. Till 1971, both, rented and owned
households
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' percentages demonstrated gradual decrease and increase, respectively and reached sharply 50% in the early 1970s
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, in 1981 the
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of owned accommodations was exactly 60%,
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rented ones were 20% less. After that, in 2001 the number of
households
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owning apartments reached its peak with just below 70% and those who rented reached its lowest with about one third. Next decade the
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of people who owned living places came to a halt by almost 65% and who rented above 30%
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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