The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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three bakeries in Calgary,

Amandine

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bakery

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Bakery

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,

Mari

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baker

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shop

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, and

Bolo

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cakery

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between 2000 and 2010.

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, at the first of the

period

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, the

Mari

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baker

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shop

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,

Amandine

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bakery

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, and

Bolo

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cakery

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they

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remained the same.

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, the

Mari

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baker

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shop

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increased and

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dropped

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end

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. The

Amandine

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bakery

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remained the same over the

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and

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it went up. The

bolo

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cakery

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it has

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fluctuated and

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remained the same, after that it

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gradually

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. Regarding the

Mari

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baker

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shop

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yearly

incom

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income

, in 2000, it stood at 80000$. After two

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increase

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to nearly 85000$.

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2003 until 2004, it rose gradually to 87000$. There was a dropped

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the profit in 2005, and it fluctuated over two

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until 2008.

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it stood at 40000$ in 2010. In terms of the

incom

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income

of the

Bolo

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cakery

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, at the first of the

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, it stood at 20000$, after

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it

increase

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slowly in 2001.

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2002 until 2003, it went up to 40000$, over four

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it remained the same until 2007. In 2008 It went up to 60000$. After

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it rose slowly in 2010. With regard to

Amandine

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bakery

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, at the start of the

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it stood at 48000$ in 2000, it stayed the same over five

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. In 2006, there was a sharp

increase

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until 2010, it stood at nearly 110000$.