The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of 

new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line chart depicts the
amount
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number
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of
stores
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that were launched and terminated between 2011 and 2018 in one unknown country.
It is clear that
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the action of closing
shops
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had decreased by 1000
stores
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between 2011 and 2018,
while
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the act of opening
stores
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had sunk from 8700 in 2011 to 3000 only in 2018.
According to
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the given graph, we can see a huge fluctuation in the opening of
stores
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. If we go across the years, it is obvious that in 2012, there was a great drop in the number of new
stores
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.
However
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, those new
shops
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kept increasing in numbers during the next 3 years (from 2012 to 2014). in 2015 there was a simple dipped by 2000 new
stores
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.
This
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was not the case for the next 3 years, the quantity of new
stores
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witnessed some kind of stabilization until 2017.
On the other hand
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, the quantity of out-of-business
shops
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had witnessed the same kind of
this
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fractionation. We can notice that 2015 was a year of thriving, less than 500
shops
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were closed for good.
In contrast
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, in 2014 the sum of opined and closed
shops
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was equal.
to sum up
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,
this
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figure illustrates the quantity and the status of
shops
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in one town. It is noticeable that 2015 is the year where
this
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country had less of
stores
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closing and more opening.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stores, shops with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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