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the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant

the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant
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The table shows the number of
people
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 that speaks 6 of the most spoken languages around the world, comparing native
speakers
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 and who speak the
language
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 without being a native speaker.
Overall
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, it can be argued that Mandarin Chinese is the most spoken
language
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 presented in
this
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 table
while
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 Portuguese is the less spoken focusing on the total number of
speakers
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.
Moreover
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, English is the most spoken
language
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 as an additional
language
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. Focusing on details, Mandarin Chinese is spoken by 1,090
million
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people
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 but only by 190
million
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people
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 as an additional
language
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.
On the other hand
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, English is spoken by 942
million
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people
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 and almost two-thirds of them speak it as an additional
language
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. The less-spoken
language
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 of the table is Portuguese with 203
million
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 native
speakers
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 and 10
million
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 non-native
speakers
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, speakers, language, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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