Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e. g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
Technology
nowadays make
our Change the verb form
makes
life's
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life
easer
, Correct your spelling
easier
such
as, we can search for any apps
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app
that's
includes the Unnecessary verb
that
technology
so we have the informations
quickly without Change the wording
information
pieces of information
get
tired of searching Change the verb form
getting
from
different sources like books, newspapers, and magazines. Change preposition
for
People
now Add the comma(s)
,People
they
depend Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
apply
technology
for their life because everything they use is
Change the verb form
also depends
also
depends on the
Correct article usage
apply
technology
. Individuals who do their work
outside their workplace
can make them more focused and Replace the word
work
having
both advantages and disadvantages associated with the topic, the positive aspects take precedence over the drawbacks.
Wrong verb form
have
People
who Change preposition
For people
having
a Change the form of the verb
have
job
, its better to do their work
outside of their workplace
, if they stay in their
same Change the word
the
workplace
they will feel boring
and Replace the word
bored
this
will let them stop doing their work
. Also
, they will feeling
enjoy Change the verb form
feel
be feeling
to do
their Change the verb form
doing
work
it
they stay Correct your spelling
if
on
their home or cafe, Change preposition
in
this
gave them a
positive energy to achieve their goals and get a high promotion in their Correct article usage
apply
job
. That how
Add a missing verb
is how
the
information Correct article usage
apply
technology
can help the
workers to do their Correct article usage
apply
job
well and perfect
.
Change the word
perfectly
However
, there are some disadvantages when it comes to do
their Change the verb form
doing
work
outside their workplace
, some of
people can't focus when they do some of their Change preposition
apply
works
outside their Fix the agreement mistake
work
workplace
, they
don't feel comfortable so they prefer to stay in their Correct word choice
and they
workplace
so they can focus more on their work
.
In conclusion, the advantages are outweigh
the disadvantages, because when you change your Change the verb form
outweigh
workplace
you can focuse
more and don't feel Correct your spelling
focus
boring
Replace the word
bored
about
your Change preposition
with
job
, information technology
let our work
and life more success
and let us Replace the word
successful
to
get to achieve our goals Change the verb form
apply
easer
.Correct your spelling
easier
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