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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disargee with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books #disargee
E-reading is popular
now a days
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. With the advent of smartphones, we are able to read newspapers, magazines and books at our convenience
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lesser
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 fee. And there is a misconception that going forward we will be able to read anything without any payment. We will discuss the possibility of
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are
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huge
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a huge
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 number of content out there to read, where few of them
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 minimal effort to prepare and few of them
needs
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 more effort and time to prepare. If both of these can be given for free, there is no value to the efforts spent on the
later
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 one. Though people can read them online, the publishers will
lay
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 a monthly or yearly subscription fee. Until
,
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 they are backed by
huge
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 amount of investment or donation,
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 cannot be given away for free.
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, we have to pay for the good content always. Yes, still people can read anything they want online for free, but they will not read from a legitimate source which is an
offense
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as per
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 many countries. So, in the near future, it is people will not be able to read everything for free
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 until they indulge in piracy
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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