Some people think that life is better in cities, however others claim that village life is far better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an opinion said that living in
cities
is more beneficial for you but there is also
a contrast
view which is Change the verb form
contrasting
life
in rural
area is much better. I will discuss both of these two views and give my opinion on Add an article
a rural
the rural
this
topic.
To begin
with, some people
tend to believe that living in big
city is more advantageous. One of the most benefits you can have when living in Add an article
a big
the big
metropolis
is that you have more chances to approach the most up-to-date technology. Obviously, the more modern the technology, the more convenient Add an article
a metropolis
people
's life
becomes. For instance
, students living in urban area
can easily sign up for international distance learning courses from all over the world by using the Fix the agreement mistake
areas
internet
. Capitalize word
Internet
Furthermore
, recreational activities in the cities
are much more diverse than in rural areas. Additionally
, people
will have more job opportunities in cities
because most of the factories, offices, companies
are situated in the city.
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and companies
On the other hand
, there is also
point
of view Add an article
a point
the point
such
as village life
is way better. The environment such
as air, water,... in the metropolis is completely more polluted. The rural areas
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areas'
area's
environement
is less polluted because there are not as many buildings, factories, Correct your spelling
environment
transport
,... as there are in the Correct word choice
or transport
cities
. When people
live in the countryside, their health will less likely to be damaged by these pollutions. Besides
that, all the food
and agricultural products are produced in the countryside too. Citizens in these places will have the most quality and fresh food
. Their food
do
not have to be freighted in from other places Change the verb form
does
therefore
the price of these products is significantly cheaper than food
in the cities
, which is transported from other areas.
In conclusion, both of these lifestyles have their own advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, I prefer cities
Change the noun form
city
life
to village life
as getting to use the latest innovations is my priority.Submitted by macgicongkhaingoha
on
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