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Some people think that life is better in cities, however others claim that village life is far better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is an opinion said that living in
cities
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 is more beneficial for you but there is
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 a
contrast
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 view which is
life
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 in
rural
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a rural
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 area is much better. I will discuss both of these two views and give my opinion on
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 topic.
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 with, some
people
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 tend to believe that living in
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 city is more advantageous. One of the most benefits you can have when living in
metropolis
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a metropolis
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 is that you have more chances to approach the most up-to-date technology. Obviously, the more modern the technology, the more convenient
people
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's
life
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 becomes.
For instance
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, students living in urban
area
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areas
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 can easily sign up for international distance learning courses from all over the world by using the
internet
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.
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, recreational activities in the
cities
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 are much more diverse than in rural areas.
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,
people
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 will have more job opportunities in
cities
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 because most of the factories, offices,
companies
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and companies
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 are situated in the city.
On the other hand
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, there is
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point
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a point
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 of view
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 as village
life
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 is way better. The environment
such
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 as air, water,... in the metropolis is completely more polluted. The rural
areas
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areas'
area's
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environement
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environment
 is less polluted because there are not as many buildings, factories,
transport
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or transport
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,... as there are in the
cities
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. When
people
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 live in the countryside, their health will less likely to be damaged by these pollutions.
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 that, all the
food
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 and agricultural products are produced in the countryside too. Citizens in these places will have the most quality and fresh
food
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. Their
food
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do
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 not have to be freighted in from other places
therefore
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 the price of these products is significantly cheaper than
food
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 in the
cities
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, which is transported from other areas. In conclusion, both of these lifestyles have their own advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, I prefer
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cities
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city
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life
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 to village
life
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 as getting to use the latest innovations is my priority.
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