Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

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of the
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getting worse and
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causes a bad
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for the
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and the
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. Some of the causes of
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are, there are no clear
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in the
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, so that let the
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do
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bad behavior.
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, the
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of the
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is not good, some of the
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are not teaching well and they don't behave
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with the
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so that let the
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don't respect the
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. There is no oversight for the
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and the
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, so that
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them the freedom to do whatever they want. There are no consequences
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the
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students
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who
are not behave
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well. All of these effects let the
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not
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well and
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it
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affect
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their
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so
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a big
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for the
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. There are some solutions
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these problems. The
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should do a monthly questionnaire for the
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and the
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. The questionnaire for the
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will ask them how the
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are
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with them and how is their teaching, for the
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it will ask about how
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the levels of the
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and how they are behaving.
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making
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a clear
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clear rules
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rules
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in the
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so the
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can behave well and if any of them broke any of the
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they will have a consequence because of broking the
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. These are the best solutions
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let the
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behave well. In conclusion, a lot of
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are behaving very
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in
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, because there are no clear
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and there is no oversight of the
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, but there are some solutions
may
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help to solve
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, to check and make a qusonnarie for the
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and the
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to see how they behaving and making consequences for the
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who broke the
rules
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.
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