The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004 5

The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004 5
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line graph illustrates the figure for passengers using three transportation networks in Great Britain from 1950 to 2004.
Overall
, all three systems experienced an upward trend, with the most notable similarity between the national rail network and the London Underground. Starting from one billion passengers using the national rail network in 1950,
this
figure rose slightly to a peak of about 1.1 billion just before 1960, before dropping consistently to reach the lowest level of 600
million
in 1980.
In contrast
, the number of journeys on the London Underground was two-thirds of those on the national rail network, with around 750
million
.
Subsequently
,
this
number remained relatively stable until 1970, followed by a gradual decrease to a low of 500
million
in the 1980s. Both these two systems displayed an upward trend from 1980, reaching 1000
million
in 2004/05.
On the other hand
, the Light railway and metro systems, which were introduced in the 1960s, carried fewer passengers compared to the other two networks, with no more than 10
million
over the first 15 years.
Nonetheless
, there was a marginal growth in the number of passenger journeys in the 1980s, reaching nearly 200
million
in 2004/05.
Submitted by vincentyu on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: