Dear Sir, I am writting this letter to inform you regarding project related course. i am Aiden. i am taking diploma in your college in heath care aide. i need to finish my course last to full fill my requirement. Moreover, i am not able to finish my course at time because of right hand injury. So this the reason i was unable to inform you at time. Also, i have physician reference letter regarding this mishappening and taking bed rest. Please give me 2-4 days more to complete my course. Because now am able to write and complete my work as early as possible. i am almost at the end of project, so i just need a time for final completion and wrting a bibliography. Hope you understad this circumstance and give me some extra time. Thank you Your sincerely, Aiden

#sir #project #course #aiden #diploma #college #heath #care #aide #requirement #time #right #hand #injury #reason #physician #reference #rest #work #completion #bibliography #hope #understad #circumstance

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you regarding project related course. I am Aiden. I am taking a diploma in your college in health care aid. I need to finish my course

last

to full fill my requirement.

Moreover

, I am not able to finish my course on time because of a right-hand injury. So

this

is the reason I was unable to inform you at the time.

Also

, I have a physician's reference letter regarding

this

mishappening and taking bed rest. Please give me 2-4 days more to complete my program. Because now am able to write and complete my work as early as possible. I am almost

at the end

of the project, so I just need a week for final completion and writing a bibliography. Hope you understand

this

circumstance and give me some extra time. Thank you Yours sincerely, Aiden

Submitted by gill22kulvir on Tue Jul 04 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

147 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we reverse this trend? What punishment methods should be used, in your opinion?
There is no doubt that illegal activities are on the rise these days which has been accomplished by more youngsters than other age groups. This essay will examine the causes and solutions to such societal issues with illustrations of valid punishments according to teenagers’ crimes.
<4
band
write at least 180 words you live in a room in college which you share with another student . however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college . in the letter , describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer begin your letter as follows: Dear sir or madam
I am writing this letter right now to describe my situation and I hope to find a solution for me. I live in a room with my colleague at university , I don't satisfied for this accommodation for several reasons:
5
band
We are becoming less influenced by advertising now than in the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
The use of online sources brought more awareness in the public these days as compared to a decade ago, while population were so innocent and easily got attracted to the product through the advert. Moreover, people are using product reviews and consumer's comments to make a choice whether to buy or not. In my opinion, it is a significantly positive amplification because an individual could save more just spending on necessities. The essay will analyse the aforementioned reason by using the examples and further discuss, how it is a positive development.
5.5
band
Some people think that school and government should take responsibility to transport children to school. While some people think that parents should get children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Commuting to school safely is an important and everyday activity for each family. Therefore, there are different ideas about who, government, educational institutes or parents, is responsible for this activity. As far as I am concerned, it is flexible but both sides should take the obligation.
9
band
You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development
As a local resident, I would like to protest the development of our local airport as it would bring many negative consequences. I am writing to request you to publish an editorial in your newspaper regarding the problems the expansion of the local airport would cause.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we reverse this trend? What punishment methods should be used, in your opinion?

We are becoming less influenced by advertising now than in the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people think that school and government should take responsibility to transport children to school. While some people think that parents should get children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development