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In many modern societies , grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandchildren. What do you think are the consequences of this ?

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Nowadays, the young generation is obsessed with their smartphones and social media. Because, of
this
 they are not getting
along with
 the elders of their family.
This
 trend will eventually cause more damage to them
as well as
the
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society
 in many ways. We will discuss
further
about
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this
 in the following paragraphs. Owing to
this
behavior
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, the modern generation will lose the knowledge about the significance of their culture and heritage, which eventually leads to a
society
 without any value. In the recent statement by
Cultural
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Society
 of India, around 20% of the people do not know about their culture and heritage. They will
also
 lose
the
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access to their family tree and at a certain point
of
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time
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 they will not know where they came from. Grandparents are living across many generations, they have seen an era without
internet
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the internet
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 and with
internet
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. They possess more knowledge and more experience. As their grandchildren, spend less time with them they are losing their opportunity to learn from
others
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 mistakes. So, the possibility of doing the same mistake which their grandparents did is more. The elder people in a family will introduce their grandchildren to their relatives.
This
 will lead to a
society
 made of bonding, emotions and love, which we are losing now. "Every action has
a
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 opposite reaction", in the same
way
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this
 disinterested action of getting
along with
 their grandparents, will create a
society
 of no values, bonding, love and emotions. As humans are social animals, we will lose
this
 inherent quality of
us
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ourselves
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 in no time.
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